Section 3 - Example Essays with Feedback

Reading through example essays is often pretty useful – you get an idea of what sorts of arguments people are making, and you get an idea of how those essays would be marked.
 
We’ve attached some example essays that were written by students who attended our courses over the past few years. Various members of the 6med team (medical students at Oxford/Cambridge) have written feedback and comments on these essays. 

We obviously can’t guarantee that they’re marked to the same standard as the BMAT but we’ve given it our best shot, and done our best to illustrate the reasons for giving the marks that we did.
 
Enjoy!
Section 3 - Example Essays with Feedback
5A - Dolphins
5A - Integrity
4.5A - Extreme Sports
3B - Extreme Sports
3B - Patient Consent
2.5B - Vaccines